Sunday, February 26, 2012

YOU HEAR ME? by Betsy Franco


 BIBLIOGRAPHY
Franco, Betsy. 2000. YOU HEAR ME? Cambridge, MA: Candlewick. ISBN 9780763611590

PLOT SUMMARY
In this innovative compilation of poetry and essays written by teenage boys, Betsy Franco allows their voice to be heard with no added opinion or filter. The perspective of the male youth is dark, frightening, abrasive, witty, and heart wrenching.  The age range begins at 12 to 20 years old.  Shocking words from personal experiences of young boys being tortured by their peers for having a mental illness, like Tourette syndrome to cursing the daily toll of monotonous school and droning adults always telling them what to do and how they should feel. Each poem is unique and yet similar. Their thoughts are dark and riddled with pain and fear. They cry out for help and attention, but they refuse to voice it out loud in favor of remaining in the shadows where eyes cannot touch them.  The poems touch on the subjects of sex, anger, conformity, jealousy, family, rejection, drugs, homosexuality, and bullying. These are all topics that are relevant to the life of young boys, and yet generally shied away from being discussed and usually swept under the rug.

CRITICAL ANALYSIS
Franco produces jaw-dropping poetry in all forms; some are lyrical while others are blank verse. The voice of teenage boys is disturbing. The rhyming words capture the intensity of their words, and purposeful separation of words with spaces and punctuation create a resounding effect of crying or screaming. Some of the poems are very short with only 12 words and some taking up two pages in paragraph form. For example, the essay entitled “The Bus Stop” is written in a journalized paragraph in first person form. The tale discusses a young boy’s day at the bus stop where he watches a girl and boy he “kind of knew” physically fight with the baby in their arms. It is straight forward with no deeper meaning or discussion of feelings or symbolism. In other poems, like “Broken Glass” that is full of symbolism and alliteration and very short.
Cursing jargon litter the pages of some poems, referencing particular body parts and comparing religious figures to cleaning products.  While, the imagery and irony of secret emotions are sometimes titled and other times left blank. Each author is listed with their work, along with their age to epitomize their individuality as singular voices in a collective group.

REVIEW EXCERPT(S)
“The poetry is rooted in a wide range of neighborhoods, families, and classrooms, and the language is direct and frank, with a rhythm ("I'm / not a / hip hop / Dred / retro / 4-pierced brother") and a physical immediacy in the imagery. Some voices are more private, about secrets, sadness, the weariness of the blues, and the loneliness when a girlfriend leaves ("the photograph torn in half"). In one of the best pieces, a boy thinks about his birth mother ("What if . . . ?"). There are no intrusive illustrations, just the images and music of the words, and lots of white space that makes it easy to browse. Many teens will recognize their search for themselves.” – Booklist
“Others speak of the fear of alternately being abandoned and loved, of being shunned or ridiculed. Obviously, there's some harsh language and tough situations but they add to the believability and timeliness of the words. You Hear Me? is a fresh approach to hearing what today's youths have to say, and it's refreshing that the words came straight from them.” – School Library Journal

CONNECTIONS
If you are prepared to handle shock and revulsion by parents, this book is an empowering vision into the mind of teenage boys. It will definitely raise topics of discussion without much aid from the librarian or teacher. This book was actually listed in the “Restricted List” by Texas Library Association in 2006.
Other teenage poetry:
Aquado, Bill. PAINT ME LIKE I AM: TEEN POEMS FROM WRITERSCORPS. ISBN 9780064472647
Franco, Betsy. THINGS I HAVE TO TELL YOU: POEMS AND WRITINGS BY TEENAGE GIRLS. ISBN 9780763610357

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